Row 70233

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This is the answer 👇🏻, should I ask it to check only Grammar mistakes, without any stylish changes?

Your sentence is quite good, but I'll make a few minor adjustments for clarity and correctness. Here's the revised version with explanations:

**Original Sentence:** "I know a person who went to a bank to make a deposit and after filling out the form, she wrote a wrong number. But then she noticed the mistake and filled out a new form."

**Revised Sentence:** "I know someone who went to a bank to make a deposit, and after filling out the form, she wrote an incorrect number. However, she noticed the mistake and filled out a new form."

**Explanation:**

1. **"A person" to "someone":** - "Someone" is more natural and concise than "a person."

2. **Comma usage:** - Adding a comma after "deposit" helps clarify the sentence by separating the main clause from the subordinate clause.

3. **"Wrote a wrong number" to "wrote an incorrect number":** - While "wrong number" is understandable, "incorrect number" is more precise and formal.

4. **"But then" to "However":** - "However" is more formal and appropriate for transitioning between sentences, compared to "but then."

**Full Corrected Sentence:** "I know someone who went to a bank to make a deposit, and after filling out the form, she wrote an incorrect number. However, she noticed the mistake and filled out a new form."

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